In my life, I have many things to be thankful for, especially later in the year. There's my parents, friends, family, animals, technology, and music. I'm greatly thankful for my parents because my father's been in and out of the hospital all year long, and my mother's gone in once, but helped me through it. My friends all helped me keep a smile on my face and not to feel so depressed about it. My family also helped, at least the ones that didn't go to the hospital. Every holiday this year, someone's been in the hospital. I'm grateful for my dogs because they also helped me through this year. As for technology, I'm grateful to be have so much in my house. Music is practically part of my life source. I nearly live and breath it, I never go a day with out listening to something. As you can see, I have many things to thankful for, some I didn't even put. 

I know that we all at least have something to be thankful for. I know that some of us don't have a home, or regular food to eat, but we can all be grateful for the people who donate. The people who volunteer is also a great thing, just think about New York! The people who volunteer and help are especially things to be grateful for, no matter what. Just what about the charities that people out all the time? And a smile? What about a laugh? These are all things that we take for granted everyday, me included. No matter what, we all have something to be thankful, grateful, appreciative, or anything else you want to say for.
Brianna A.
11/16/2012 05:41:27 am

First off, you need to indent 5 spaces. Also, you need to type another paragraph and you need to fix minor spelling grammer. But your paragraph is amazing and I love the design of your website.


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